寫作微技能
讀后續(xù)寫思維拓展訓(xùn)練之21——增強表現(xiàn)力之四
運用修辭手法之明喻
明喻(simile)是比喻修辭的一種,在強調(diào)兩種事物的相似點的同時,本體、喻體、喻詞都出現(xiàn),且能使語言生動形象。喻詞有like, as, as...as, as if, of, compared to, be similar to, what等。
佳句觀摩
1.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. (情感描寫)
我感覺自己像漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。
2.Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels. (景物描寫)
繁星像閃閃發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。
3.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self locked away inside. (動作描寫)
薩瑟老師看著我的眼睛,仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。
4.Father rushed to his son's school, only to discover the building was as flat as a pancake. (景物描寫)
父親沖到兒子的學(xué)校后,才發(fā)現(xiàn)這座建筑已經(jīng)變成一片廢墟。