完成了審題的過程, 有了具體要點和整體布局后, 就要整合信息點, 讓龐雜的內容變得富有邏輯性和層次感。在句與句內在銜接的基礎上, 做到段落間的起承轉合, 使文章有整體性、連貫性。學會正確使用連接詞、銜接句, 能為寫作助一臂之力。
I.思維路徑1:連接詞助力語言連貫
在句與句之間、段與段之間恰當地使用一些承上啟下的連接性詞語是語言連貫性得以實現的最常用手段。連接性詞語歸納如下:
1. 起始關系:to begin with, first of all, as we all know, as is known, as is shown in. . . , according to 等。
As we all know, good learning habits contribute to efficient study.
2. 時間順序:at the beginning, then, later, finally, at last, in the end, afterwards, since then, after that, immediately, meanwhile等。
At the beginning, I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I mopped the floor.
3. 條件關系:if, unless, in case(of), as/so long as, on condition that, provided(that)等。
I would be very grateful if you could meet my uncle at the airport.
4. 轉折關系:but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, nevertheless等。
However, not until the match was over did we realize that we lost it.
5. 因果關系:because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, as a result of, so, therefore, as a result/consequence等。
Therefore, there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs.
6. 并列關系:and, or, as well as, not only. . . but also. . . , either. . . or. . . , not. . . but. . . , neither. . . nor. . . 等。
We will have a good time there and I will send you some photos taken there.
7. 遞進關系:besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, what’s worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, more importantly等。
Many of them can hardly look after themselves, still less manage their own lives.
8. 列舉事實:such as, for example/instance, take. . . for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words, on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . , for one thing. . . for another. . . 等。